Commentary feedback

the fact that you have a group member missing will effect their individual ideas on the video, but the points were shared pretty equally between the two. There was a point where you had too many layers of audio, and other times when the points weren't conveyed to understanding. Apart from this you answer each question to a good extent and didn't dwell on points too long. Including a clip from Lilly Allen's video was a good exmaple of showing you intertextuality.