Feedback on Commentary from Group 45

We liked the way that your shots faded into each other instead of jumping from one to another, this made it look like one shot instead of many individual shots which was effective. We also thought that using a clip of the Lily Allen video was a nice touch, this was effective because it enabled us to visualise what you were talking about. Using the question over a snippet of your music video was a good idea because we knew what you were going to be talking about and what to expect.
Well done :)

Roughcut Feedback

After watching your roughcut we feel that the idea behind your video is good and the editing where you have turned the footage black and white is effective, however it became quite confusing and made the viewer feel a bit disorientated as the camerawork was a little too shaky. We also felt that the continuity of the footage was a bit random as it kept changing between colour and black and white. There was also no footage of the artist therefore lip syncing cannot be including.
The pace of the editing reflected the pace of the song well. The written description of the missing footage enabled us to create an image of how the video would look and we think that once it is filmed it would look good :)