Group 43 Feedback

hi, although you have most of the footage there is some missing (although you are probably aware of that.) The text that you added helped us to visualise what it will look like when complete.

You need to find a way in which to include some lip-syncing in the footage.

The feel of the video is very abstract which does fit the pace of the song and parts of the editing do change on the beat.

This would make it sell easier to the artist as it suits the song and will appeal more.

More variety would help the video stay interesting and keep the audience watching.