Feedback from t2 - 44

well detailed story board, good use of vocabularly (such as handy cam wide shot, long shot etc). Easily to show someone who is not familiar to the idea of what the music video is about. Also good research of the the location of the music video shown via the photos.

You've pointed out the main character in your storyboard but have lacked to continue through your storyboard. We're presuming from the first shot that you're doing an establishing shot to show who the artist is and when surrounded by others is pointed out. Try to make your main artist identifiable. (:

Good work on the background, your inspiration for digipack work is smart and experimental, lot's of work into posters and albums shows your interest in it!