Response to feedback..

In response to Group T2-44 'You've pointed out the main character in your storyboard but have lacked to continue through your storyboard.' We didn't realise that this wasnt clear enough and so we will go back and make sure that she is pointed out in each shot, She is in every shot as the video is about her and her daily life so we assumed that this would be clear.

& from Group T2-48's feedback ' you could spend some time explaining your choice of location more and explaining the relationship between music and lyrics.'
The locations we chose were related to her daily life so their boring & repetitive, so we felt that Cambridge would be an obvious place because its academic, boring & busy, with commuting being challenging. We also chose Tesco (in ely) as it will be easier for holly to transport her kit to there, and we also wanted our performace to be somewhere different, for example we're next to a river, which seems idealic relaxation. Our reasons for choosing a music shop for the shots of the girl with the piano is basically because we don't have a piano and this could be part of her daily life, as she wishes to play the piano. It is also an alternative place for the performance.
We also have related our video to some lyrics, with the clock hand moving fast as in the lyrics it says 'we wont let time erase us', we also linked 'congregation of familiar faces' to the bus queue.

Overall we are pretty pleased with our feedback, we've received lots of positive comments on our blog and also some constructive criticism that we can work on.